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oy, I see the jpeg compression has made a lot of fuzzies on this guy, so my critique will be off (please consider trying to submit higher quality ones if your camera allows).

Lots of deep dark black in this. Hmmm... looks almost brooding if you focus on that. But then, the water has highlights and so does the grass... The gentle wake that's slowly approaching stills the whole scene... and I think that tiny white figure/pole on the bank near the middle is suddenly eye-catching when you take a good long look. My only critique is I wish I could see those trees brought out more... but then, if you want it to feel more moody, you really can't do that.

Either way, neat composition and still... I want to know what made those ripples.... but it's just barely out of view around that grass. I love the mystery in that. :D

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